So far I really like the story line, but there are A LOT of grammar mistakes. Some word usage and spelling is off, and some of the words seem to be slang words that don't really exist or are improperly used. I'm only on chapter two at the moment, but so far I have been able to ignore the mistakes because I like the story :). Keep up the good work!
January 2nd, 2013 at 06:27pm