Christmas With You - Comments

Oh my God. This was a brilliant little story! The story was simple, but in a good way--in a way that makes a story good (does that make sense?). For one, your main character, Sonya, she was different in the way that she was just a normal girl. You didn't write her as some corky little thing, and I really liked that. She was simple, like the story, but complicated, too, like humans naturally are. And how you wrote Louis in this was absolutely flawless. You didn't make him out to be this major dick or have him being too 'sassy'. He was just Lou, exactly how I'd really imagine him to be. The way you wrote those two characters helped this story so much and I fell in love with them.

The story itself, as a whole, was so cute. I loved how you gave us bits of their past in the chapters; that really helped me get to know them as a friends and fall in love with the two of them even more. Then the plot line is something that's been done before, but you wrote differently, some how. I can't explain how, either, but you did, and it was amazing, refreshing.

I can't say enough good things about this piece. It's so cute, but then it's sad and there's just the right amount of anticipation in certain parts... I could go on and on! But it was so good and you're an amazing writer. Honestly, so talented. :)

so, this is in relation to your a/n on the first chapter. if you should ever decide to write louis, i think i might just die from happiness. i honestly don't think i'd be able to cope with how in love i'd be with him. that being said, PLEASE DO THIS!!!!! it's a worthy way to leave this earth, completely smitten over a fictional version of louis tomlinson!! <3

this story was amazing!!!! i want a pissed and gorgeous louis being madly in love with me!!! <333333333333333

So, it's way past Christmas... but I just got to reading this haha. It was really good! I got hit in the feels with this haha. You should definitely write Louie more often! (I wouldn't complain if you wrote Liam either.. since he's my favorite haha.. But I LOVE how you write Louie.. and Harry)

So great! I love this. :) ALOT.

So, I was going to try and come up with a legitimate comment...since that is exactly what this story deserves. Unfortunately I am at a total loss for words. All I can say is that I absolutely loved this. It was truly beautiful. Just...there are no other words to describe it but beautiful. This is the best Louis story I have ever ever read.

why is this so short oh god i'm so sad i love this so much :((
But ugh, I have all the Louis feels now thanks. Anywho, this was such a lovely short story and it's definitely one of my favourites. xox

I DON'T KNOW WHETHER TO HATE YOU OR HATE YOU. BUT I HATE YOU. GOD FICTIONAL SONYA ALMOST GOT KNOCKED UPSIDE THE HEAD. BUT THEN YOU PUT HER (AND ME) THROUGH THE RINGER. AND I HATE YOU.

AND THIS WAS PERFECT BUT I HATE YOU. AND I WILL HAVE FUN WITH MY HARRY DOLL.

...............CANNOT BELIEVE I SAID THAT. OK BYE.

This story needs more love, you know that? Anyways, Sonya and Louis better get together next chapter or else I'll be really sad. Trust me, Sonya isn't the only one you're killing with feels here XD

SONYA IS ALREADY SAD. SONYA IS VERY VERY VERY SAD AND DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. S O B B I N G.

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO DO EXCEPT SOB INTO MY PILLOW AND THROW MY PHONE OUT THE WINDOW FOR THE GETMAN SHEPHERD TO EAT. SEND HELP SOS SOS SOS.

This is a lot of awesome. 'Nuff said. :)

IT SUCKS THAT I WON'T GET TO READ THE SECOND, THIRD, OR FOURTH PARTS BECAUSE I'M ALREADY WALKING OUTSIDE TO GO JUMP IN FRONT OF AN ONCOMING SEMI TRUCK ON THE INTERSTATE.

I AM SO DONE WITH EVERYTHING. I'M BOWING DOWN TO MY QUEEN TOO.