ok, so i think the whole witch idea is good, but my only problem is that you arent keeping true to the books. For example, michael's parents left because his mother had cancer, but she got better and he still speaks to them even though the live outside of morganville. secondly, 716 west lot street was the house michael has always lived in, so surely she would just go to her childhood home. thirdly, michaels parents didnt leave that long ago, they left when michael was 18. sorry if you think i'm being quite harsh but i truly love the books and this story is harder to follow, if the reader, like me, has read the series several times. overall i am enjoying your work so far :)
February 6th, 2013 at 11:41pm