So I like the song lyrics a lot. It's definitely a different kind of songfic than what I usually see on Mibba. It just has such wonderful imagery and metaphors. The red as strawberries in the summertime line is an amazing lyric so I'm not surprised you found inspiration in this.
I know a little Russian so I recognise the word snowfall as the chapter title. It's interesting and I like how it's in red to match, but I don't get the connection of why it's in Russian. Just to sound cooler?
I think it's quite a literal interpretation of the lyrics, which makes for a very unique and slightly haunting story. It's a bit surreal then, kind of like a nightmare, and I liked that feel to it a lot. I liked how it started very average and got creepier as it went along. It's nicely written and such an intriguing plot I wish it was longer. Like if it had a bit more description or you built up a bit more suspense to the moment of Michael's scarf coming off, it would really just be phenomenal. It's a really neat story and the ending is such a wow moment. It just leaves me wanting more!
I know a little Russian so I recognise the word snowfall as the chapter title. It's interesting and I like how it's in red to match, but I don't get the connection of why it's in Russian. Just to sound cooler?
I think it's quite a literal interpretation of the lyrics, which makes for a very unique and slightly haunting story. It's a bit surreal then, kind of like a nightmare, and I liked that feel to it a lot. I liked how it started very average and got creepier as it went along. It's nicely written and such an intriguing plot I wish it was longer. Like if it had a bit more description or you built up a bit more suspense to the moment of Michael's scarf coming off, it would really just be phenomenal. It's a really neat story and the ending is such a wow moment. It just leaves me wanting more!