December 14th, 2012 at 10:44pm
Surrender - Comments
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yeah, as soon as I read about his black t-shirt caressing the muscles of his arms, chest and mid-section like it had been painted to his body and the mention on the man thighs I immediately though of Matt too, although Syn was a close second, I could picture this for him too...either way it was fucking sexy...lol. So well written and not your cookie cutter Dom/sub story. So thanks for putting an original stamp on it and being awesome:D I obviously loved it!December 14th, 2012 at 09:48am
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@ CharmedLuna
Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! I didn't plan it out, I just kinda started writing and didn't stop until it was done. And went back to edit and had to upload out at work due to home computer difficulties lol. You're such an inspiration to the writer in me. I can't wait to see all the entries, there's some good ones so far!
@ EdgeOfReality
Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)
@ pierce the sirens.
Thank you, I appreciate the praise. Keeping the dom unnamed came to me as I was writing it.December 14th, 2012 at 09:35am -
I immediately went to Matt as well! This is wonderful UNFDecember 14th, 2012 at 08:23am
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I pictured Matt too immediately. But very clever with not saying a name and let others imagine who it is. Bravo!December 14th, 2012 at 08:05am
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oh yeah. that was hot. and yes, I used Matt because... well you know hahaDecember 14th, 2012 at 06:52am
Thank you so much for your comment, I'm definitely glad to see good reactions from the story! I really take to heart how people feel about my writing and I always want to do good :)