Protector - Comments

Why hasn't this been recommended yet? I loved the idea of this in general! I do hope you update soon, also I'm really in love with the first chapter. The fact that you added religion into this is just simply awesome. I'm only on the first, but consider me highly interested!

oo sorry i just had to comment again cx. There's just so much i left out from before. I love how easy it is to follow the story and just how interesting it manages to keep me with its hooks and characters c: i saw no grammar errors or any of the such. This story is defintely too good to look past and ignore. Please update really soon.

I will admit i was a bit skeptical when comment swap gave me your story, it is defiantly not the kind of thing I usually read but i have to say i was pleasantly surprised. I found it really interesting and can't wait to see where you take this. So i will defiantly be subscribing to this.

i didn't notice any grammatical errors but i'm the worst for that so there may have been some that i didn't see. please update soon, I'm desperate to know what happens next.

i love how this story is. It is a captivating angel story. Something i have not seen that much on mibba and i just love itt. Good job

This seems like a really interesting story. I've not read many stories that are really into religion in a way like this, not on Mibba anyway, and this seems to handle it really well. I love the concept of an angel going into a human body, and the fact that you wrote God in it.

The only mistake was 'that retched human woman'. 'Retched' is actually defined as vomiting or making the noise of it. I think you meant 'wretched'.

But apart from that, it's really well done.

i really cant wait to read this, i'v never read something like this before keep writing girl
upload soon k :)