Shameless - Comments

This was very short and put together really well I think. I was looking at the words and wondering how it would end up because usually I think that some drabbles that are very short don't get the emotions across or don't put them across strong enough but I think you did so, and it came out very well.

I love how you describe both characters in this story, and have their traits and all that and hint at how they change. I think it's really good for how short this is and how in the end it totally changes. This was really good and kind of inspirational I think, at least to write about characters like this. I don't see them often enough.

Oh wow, I was not expecting that last line. What a sucker punch.

I liked this story a lot though. I liked that she wanted to corrupt this innocent boy, use him, and make him just as jaded and miserable as her. She wanted to hurt him and I like that she wound up the one hurt in the end. He turned into her and just wanted to hurt her in return. It's twisted, but I like that and also find it realistic as well. I always enjoy reading about characters like Jezebel.

I love that you named her Jezebel too. It suits her absolutely perfectly. She's immoral and shameless, exactly like the definition of a Jezebel. That's just clever and it makes the title consequently amazing. This was just a cool little one-shot.

Yes, it is a one shot haha

I could be being really stupid, but it says 1/1 so is this a one-shot??
Thank you