Home Is Where the Heart Is - Comments

Well that was a cute and interesting story! I felt that it was a bit rushed though, it seemed like you wanted to get to the part where Tom comes in so you rushed through the beginning. But anyway it was a nice story. A couple of spelling and grammar errors though, but none too big.

This was very cute, and it made me smile in a few places. I think you did wonderful with the letter you were given, and I didn't find too many grammar mistakes. I like the use of Tom Felton as well, and I think the way they met up is rather believable. I think you did amazing, so good luck!!