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So why do you like your job? Haha I do quite love your story, do continue!

FINALLY YOU HAVE UPDATED! :) Great update but I'm hoping to see more so that I can get my questions answered.

I love your story,okay? I really do I love it is so far and you just make Embry so.... cute and wow... just I love it!

I'm touched, really! I'm really thankful that you dedicated that chapter to me :)

I must say that the update is really funny to me. I mean, it's my first time to see Kara freak out and I believe that gives her more depth and make her seem more realistic.

Anyways, great update! I hope to see more of it soon!

I like it. I'm not really a fan of Twilight but I like the fanfics. I think Kara is a really interesting character. You didn't disclose a lot of information about her so she didn't come off as a Mary Sue that has a tragic past. You only gave enough info so that we could somehow see her as a broken girl who may or may not have been through a lot. You also portray Leah and Jacob well, in my opinion. I don't know much about them but they seem real. Anyways, this is a great story and I would like to see more of it. Update soon, okay?

It's such an amazing start! Please continue as soon as possible!

I agree with everything loverboy. said. This story is amazing. There should definitely be more comments on this wonderful Twilight story. :) I love the name Kara and I feel sorry for her. Maybe she and Leah will be good friends in th end? The are sort of similar, like loverboy. had said. I love this. I miss reading Twilight stories. Everything is O e Direction now, but this Twilight story is great.

I can't wait to see where you take this wonderful. Please update this wonderful story soon?

This story has eighteen subscribers and no comments. That's ridiculous because it's actually really good.

I like that everything is sort of building to whatever it is that you have planned, rather than throwing in a love story or crazy drama immediately. I think you portray the wolves well, especially Leah. I've always felt sorry for her. But she and Kara are kind or similar seeing as they're not really welcomed by anyone, so I'm hoping that maybe they'll have some sort of friendship. Also, I don't know if it's too early to choose a side but I'm rooting for Jacob and Kara.

Update soon!