Anarchy Is Our Only Hope - Comments

Great update, loved it hun.

@ Synyster Gates;
Haha, now I can't say what may or may not happen to Tim. That would ruin the surprise.
;)

Dang on that dude is such a prick! Tim, I wanna beat his butt so bad! For being mean to Nelly. I hope something mean happens to Tim.... ;)

Loved it!

@ Synyster Gates;
Ah! Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoy it!

I love this so much!!!

@ GlasgowXsmile
Haha! Gotta love Gemma, can't really change the craziness.
Thank you! I really want to keep true to the characters, it's nice to find out that I am :)

I love how Gemma just went in on some little teenager, crying because she so would in the show. Ahh Gemma, crazy crazy. I liked this chapter, and I have to say you write Jax pretty well.

@ GlasgowXsmile
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it.
For the next chapter I will break up the sentences.

I love the first two chapters, I always love seeing prequels of what goes on before tv shows or anything. Also young love is adorable. The ending of chapter two made me gasp because I was not expecting that to happen at all. My only complaint is that I wish you would break up your sentences so you can read everything clearly. Other than that good start!