*For December Contest: Pick a Present" The plot for your story hit me really hard and despite your story being so short, I absolutely loved it. It was romantic and I fell in love with the characters as well even though you haven't described them that much. I guess it was from their experience that I was able to decipher who was really the protagonist and the antagonist. Anyway, there was one sentence which had a grammatical error but that didn't ruin how I understand your story. I'm glad to have read this; this story was written and thought of well especially when given a prompt of having to write a story with the words: hypocrite and painting. Absolutely lovely!
The plot for your story hit me really hard and despite your story being so short, I absolutely loved it. It was romantic and I fell in love with the characters as well even though you haven't described them that much. I guess it was from their experience that I was able to decipher who was really the protagonist and the antagonist.
Anyway, there was one sentence which had a grammatical error but that didn't ruin how I understand your story.
I'm glad to have read this; this story was written and thought of well especially when given a prompt of having to write a story with the words: hypocrite and painting. Absolutely lovely!