*Comment Swap, btw :3* I actually really like this story (even though I can't stand 1D (please don't eat me D:)). It's really well written and I think that it explains and describes the things people with mental complications go through really, really well. You really get a feel for what the characters feel and how even the tiniest things can mess up their heads :)
Holy moly! I love this story! I'm so oddly attracted to Niall, just like creepy eeri weird feel and I love it so much. Same with Louis/William! Ugh love this! Can't wait for the next updat!!
I have to admit that at first I was a little hesitant in reading this, but once I started I found it quite easy. I imagine it would be quite difficult to have the reader identify with one of your characters, but you make up for it with like quirks that make your story a little more interesting.