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  • IceDeath.

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    That last line gets to me. Reading this brought back a lot of memories. I loved this so much. Good job. :D
    July 29th, 2013 at 07:53am
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    Beautiful oh my god.
    July 17th, 2013 at 06:17am
  • capheus

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    "I wish I could hate you like I say I do."
    I love that quote, i'm not exactly sure why. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that this character of yours is contradicting himself but I love it nonetheless, with or without. It just seems to make me want to read this more.

    I think the way you portrayed this guy's sadness and anger was just so spot on, it was true and just made me feel a bit awed because you could get it through to the reader so well. The last line just pretty much did it for me, you wrote up this emotion-filled story and brought it to a good end with the last line. Arms Nice.
    July 10th, 2013 at 11:35am
  • feder

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    This is really sad, and even though your descriptions are littered with curse words it just seems so right you know haha. I really love the photo you decided to use too. It fit the story really well seeing that it looked like he was jumping off something. This story really struck something in me, I love it. :)
    December 16th, 2012 at 02:00am
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