Concerning Hobbits - Comments

I absolutely love how frequent you update this! I definitely check my subscription list more often then I probably should.
I have noticed however that there are quite a lot of mistypes in this last update. A quick proof-read would probably catch these.
But I absolutely love this story! I'm not quite sure who I ship quite yet.

Such a good story!! I can not wait for more updates :) keep up the good work!

OHHHH This is exciting!! hope you can update soon. Totally Shipping Pansy and Thorin, I think they will complement each other quite well. :)

Great update. Pansy is too cute. Is it bad that I already ship her with Kili? Haha!

Again, I love it! I wonder if they're going to put up a fight about her going?! eee! I look forward to reading more.

I'm really loving this! I'm loving the company and everyone here. I'm a huge sucker for Thorin, and I'm literally shaking with excitement about his introduction. I thought about writing my own Thorin story for a while but for the longest time I kept thinking "People will think it's stupid, no one will like it", but the hype about your story has proved me wrong! I might have to give it a shot.
A few people already pointed out the minor grammatical/spelling errors. Most of it is just forgetting letters or a word here and there - nothing a quick once-over after writing the chapter won't fix. (:
Please don't take any critique in the wrong way - I mean it as friendly as possible, I swear, because I'm really enjoying the story! - but maybe cut down on the elipses? When there are too many, they can sometimes be a wee bit distracting.
Either way, I'm really loving this. I love how you have them actually talk like they might in Middle Earth! I can't wait to read more!

Wonderful! :) still hoping for Kili but wonderful! :D Please Update Soon <3

This is perfect.

Bless you. Bless you so much. Thorin and Kili, my two favorite dwarves, a wonderful blend of both book and movie, and ah, just bless your heart. I can't wait to see what becomes of this.
Also, oh, nevermind, someone already pointed out the errors. They're minor, just enough to tickle any grammar fiend into a twitch.
Ack, I can't wait for the company to be introduced.

Really happy someone finally started a Kili story :) Really hope she ends up with him though he was my favorite!!Please Update Soon!! <3 :)

I love it! yay! i was loooking to start my own Kili story and wanted to see if there were other people out there who wanted to read it, and i'm glad someone has started the craze! please update soon!

It is nice to see a Hobbit story out already! And a Thorin and Kili one no doubt! I did however notice a few little grammatical errors that looked like you just forgot to type the word. Nothing big, and easy enough to fix! I can't wait for this to really get going!

Yay someone wrote a Kili romance :] I thought he was so cute when I saw the hobbit (well both times I saw it, I'm such a dork).

Thank you so much for this story. I can't wait to read more!

Subscribed - I'm excited to see what else you have in store. (:

I cannot wait to read more of this!