The Seven: Origins - Comments

@ Arablest
thanks for telling me haha. there's a reason i got carried away with so many characters, they're my alter egos...it started with one, then three, then five and i drew the line at seven sisters. but Schizo is one too. Their mom is supposed to be all of them combined. There's also so many because they're supposed to multiply and kinda build up the clan. The other sisters are pretty bad ass, you just have to give them some faith :) if you still don't like them later, i apologize now

Overall, I'm liking this story. Only thing though all the characters at once was a bit overwhelming. Right off the bat I had to memorize fourteen children plus an evil sister, plus two sets of parents and another sister. Don't really care that much about for any of the sisters. Kalo is pretty awesome though. I hoping this will change in later chapters. Oh yeah, you pasted ch 13 twice.