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  • NorCal Noise.

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    God you are so mean to Bill.
    SO mean.

    But...
    Hey that was sort of my idea but it's missing elements
    Oooh I feel all special now =]

    I feel seriously so bad for him.
    The way Bill simply cowers under his father's demand of the ring is just so pitifully pathetic and saddening, and how he's beaten to a bloody mess just for trying to stand up to Jorg for once is sickening, and yet I know people actually do that.

    It's so messed up and I kind of felt my eyes well up a little.

    You're amazing, love, and I hope for more soon.

    xoxo
    February 28th, 2009 at 08:50am
  • nexidala

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    please dont stop writing!

    update. please!
    February 27th, 2009 at 03:53am
  • BrickByBoringBrick!

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    I lurves it!!!!! Update!!!!!!! Bitte?
    February 16th, 2009 at 04:27pm
  • NorCal Noise.

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    -melts-

    It was so cute.

    Like my new avatar.

    ZOMG I KNOW RIGHT?!

    Anywayssss

    Bill and Tom all soaking wet in the shower tongue kissing makes me feel funny inside
    :lmfao
    -is no perverted, I swear-

    The whole Tomi opening up to Bill thing was cute too.
    I almost cried a little.
    That was seriously so heartwrenching
    -wipes eyes-

    Amazing, as usual, I could never ask for more.
    But I will =]
    February 14th, 2009 at 05:50am
  • Hey Jude

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    awwww!
    omg...sooo when i saw this was updated, no joke, i got up and did a dance!
    LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
    February 11th, 2009 at 11:59pm
  • Emo64

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    wow
    chapter 16 was quite......>_>nastier than the other
    i couldn't read the last part of the chapter tho,i just had an impulse to not read it
    but whatever,keep writting
    February 11th, 2009 at 04:00pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    that was too cute
    February 11th, 2009 at 02:16am
  • Alice Verney

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    whoa go boys
    February 11th, 2009 at 01:36am
  • Eddie Cocaine.

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    <3

    ah at first I thought mean bitch lady was gonna walk in on them or something, but it was all good *squeezes*
    February 10th, 2009 at 09:08pm
  • Human

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    absolutely amazing.

    i think this is the best story ive read on mibba ever.

    please keep updating! <333 :]
    February 10th, 2009 at 08:15am
  • nexidala

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    I am IN LOVE with this story!!
    I love it!!

    Please update soon!!! :]

    *subscribes*
    February 1st, 2009 at 01:47am
  • Human

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    seriously,

    this is amazing!

    i love this story!

    so amazing.

    for once tom is the vulnerable one, its refreshing :]

    update soon!
    January 31st, 2009 at 09:13am
  • TheTigersBride.

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    XD

    I cannot get enough of this!!
    The cutest thing ever

    Update soon???
    January 26th, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • Hey Jude

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    i read half of the first chapter and decided to subscribe. thats how good your story is
    January 18th, 2009 at 06:04pm
  • sadangel10

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    thanks for the update, it was really good!!!!!
    but i still miss you're story so much=(((
    January 18th, 2009 at 04:59pm
  • NorCal Noise.

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    Hooking his finger around the dog tags that hung from Bill’s neck, Tom gave them a light tug, and Bill followed. Their lips connected sweetly and Tom couldn’t help but let a little moan escape his lips as his fingers grasped eagerly at Bill’s skin.

    I failed to mention that I think fondly of Pearl Harbor when I read that part. You know you were inspired by it too :]
    January 17th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • SucksForMe

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    Me lovers this story! Update soon??? :D
    January 12th, 2009 at 11:21pm
  • Alice Verney

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    holy crap i hate andreas right now hes an ass bill is being one too
    January 11th, 2009 at 02:19am
  • xXxAlicexXx

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    WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
    I'm a HAPPY camper!!!!
    You have no idea how happy i was when i opened the email!!!
    I swear my heart stopped beating. lol
    I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 10th, 2009 at 03:24pm
  • NorCal Noise.

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    Hey, no one complains about fluff.

    Who the fuck ever hated marshmallow fluff?

    Srsly now.

    ZOMG you should update Nirn now :tehe:
    January 10th, 2009 at 08:09am