But... Hey that was sort of my idea but it's missing elements Oooh I feel all special now =]
I feel seriously so bad for him. The way Bill simply cowers under his father's demand of the ring is just so pitifully pathetic and saddening, and how he's beaten to a bloody mess just for trying to stand up to Jorg for once is sickening, and yet I know people actually do that.
It's so messed up and I kind of felt my eyes well up a little.
wow chapter 16 was quite......>_>nastier than the other i couldn't read the last part of the chapter tho,i just had an impulse to not read it but whatever,keep writting
Hooking his finger around the dog tags that hung from Bill’s neck, Tom gave them a light tug, and Bill followed. Their lips connected sweetly and Tom couldn’t help but let a little moan escape his lips as his fingers grasped eagerly at Bill’s skin.
I failed to mention that I think fondly of Pearl Harbor when I read that part. You know you were inspired by it too :]
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I'm a HAPPY camper!!!! You have no idea how happy i was when i opened the email!!! I swear my heart stopped beating. lol I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SO mean.
But...
Hey that was sort of my idea but it's missing elements
Oooh I feel all special now =]
I feel seriously so bad for him.
The way Bill simply cowers under his father's demand of the ring is just so pitifully pathetic and saddening, and how he's beaten to a bloody mess just for trying to stand up to Jorg for once is sickening, and yet I know people actually do that.
It's so messed up and I kind of felt my eyes well up a little.
You're amazing, love, and I hope for more soon.
xoxo