Okay so the first chapter was super fan-girl and really cliche, could you at least make it more mature because then it doesn't seem as realistic. You could do with a lot of description and you should defiantly check your grammar and spelling.
*nosebleed* You were right, this was indeed HOT! :P Was a little short and fast in the plot but good anyway ;) Update soon, I like your story more with every chapter! And the song is REALLY fitting in here! Even if I had to search long for a version which was not banned :( Keep it up! xo
Oh my God! YOU'RE AWESOME ♥ I haven't expected being named in your chapter! I'm totally flattered! :oo :D Now I'm going t read chapter 3 ;) But the second chapter just made clear that you indeed are very talented and I'm even more exited to where this story will lead :)
@ AnnDowney Thank you so much for the comment, it definitely brightened my day and inspired me to write more. I'm glad you enjoyed the prequel and i'm happy that you're excited for this story!! I'll be updating tomorrow for sure!! ^_^