@ Pavelkin tell me about it, people suck and it's unfortunate that we can do nothing about it. If it's mean to be it will and as much as they don't show it guys know when they fuck up they just don't do anything until they get a swift kick in the ass.
I hope all works out and I'm happy your writing a more personal story. And thanks for responding to my super long comment :)
I am indeed a Penguins fan, love them to bits and as for writing a story about Geno? I just love Geno, he is an amazing player and I have so much respect for him and how he plays. According to my teammates I have been Geno brainwashed so much that my captain calls me Malkin and uses it to get my revved up (weirdly it works) I could just watch him play for hours on end (I am currently staring blankly at my computer screen watching him in the KHL playing against Lokomotiv)
I know it all too well, I am still trying to get him back. It's kind of why I wrote it and why I want this story be completely awesome! You would think when you had been best friends for about 13 years that you would mean something to them, but I guess it doesn't always work out that way
She def shouldn't regret that she threw the drink at him (whatever happened) he probably deserved it and he needed to grow up and now he realizes that what he had is really what he wanted and now he can appreciate now that he's older. Are you a Penguins fan? Why did you decide to write a story about Geno (welcome change from the usual hockey stories I might add.) UPDATE ASAP!
I'm not too sure about the input I have about how the story should continue, I just know that I really like the way you are writing and the mix between Russian and English AND flashbacks. I know what it feels like the have that best friend that you lost at one point. *tear tear*