Carry On - Comments

sketchawkward (100)

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chapter 3 is as far as i got this is too fast paced and confusing and you really need an editor because there's a lot of typos

January 3rd, 2013 at 01:36am

KilljoyDeathbay (100)

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Update more!! Ur reallyy killing mehhh

December 27th, 2012 at 04:46am

Sweetleafbitting (100)

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@ KilljoyDeathbay
I plan on updating tonight! Thanks for commenting it means a lot!!!

December 26th, 2012 at 10:37pm

Sweetleafbitting (100)

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@ gothique4.
Ill work on it, thanks for letting me know!!!

December 26th, 2012 at 10:37pm

KilljoyDeathbay (100)

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Please please update

December 26th, 2012 at 03:00pm

gothique4 (100)

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I tried to read it but your pages are just huge blocks of text. You really should put paragraphs in, and have the dialogue on separate lines as it will be a lot easier to read.

December 26th, 2012 at 10:24am

QueenofBatCountry (100)

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@ Sweetleafbitting
Your welcome!!!!!

December 19th, 2012 at 01:43am

Sweetleafbitting (100)

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@ QueenofBatCountry
Thank you!!!

December 19th, 2012 at 01:41am

QueenofBatCountry (100)

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GAHHH ILOVE IT

December 19th, 2012 at 01:02am