Just started and finished reading this, which made me quite sad, didn't want to finish it you have far too fluid of a writing style so hurry up and update i want to read what happens.
I got really confused when I saw this on here and noticed that I already read it on FanFiction...lol. I do love it and pretty much every time I read it it helps me get into a writing kick.
oh my gosh this is wonderful. i've read the chapters you have up now twice in the past hour. i love this so very much. i can't wait for the next installment :D
I'm enjoying this story so far, i went to see the hobbit in cinema yesterday and i thought kili was quite hot!! >< I hope you update soon! as i will be looking forward to it!! XD