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@ PuppetsDont-Dance
That'd be good. I can't wait to read the first chapter

@ NegroLeo
I'm writing a first chapter at the moment anyway that will hopefully explain more into what's happening. I'll keep you updated, if you want? Just so I don't give everything away, you see.

@ PuppetsDont-Dance
Oh I didn't think you'd take me seriously. But seriously what happened? I'm dying to know?

@ NegroLeo
I was originally thinking of doing something like that, yes, but every few chapters or so, she'd write another note. Eventually she'd be defeated, along with her team that I'd introduce further on. Thank you for your ideas, they're great!

It sounds like an evacuation plot. What caused this? How did it all begin. Maybe you should have a few notes about the person leaving talking about what happened. When did this start? How do they know whose responsible? And what can someone do to help? If it sounds a little too cliche maybe you can in a different direction. You could also have the person reading the notes at the end find them or something. From what you wrote it sounds like a live or die situation. Hopefully the person finds them before the latter occurs.