The Way Home - Comments

I just found this and read it in one go. It was a brilliant story. I've just subscribed to your other story, Whiskey but I haven't started reading it yet. Once I do, I'll comment

Awesome story. You should be really proud.
It was quick, but it still had depth and detail.
A lot of authors leave that out when writing short stories like this. <3

Sorry i didn't comment sooner, my internet was down so I've only just read it. This story ended quite nicely and it was a refreshing read. Wasn't too rushed or anything and the twist of finding out Matt was the one behind it all was great, seriously something i hadn't expected. Zack didn't go too extreme with beating Matt up and all will be well. Loved Johnny, Jimmy and Brian's inputs in this story too. Another great read. Thank you for posting it. :)

Omg a happy ending yay :)

omg i love this story

Oh man! Last chapter!
Ahahaha How exciting!!!<33

Well like Zacky promised he didn't punch him which is good and he talked to him which is even better but what's goin to happen with their friendship now tht Zacky knows, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh man tht was hot, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

:DDDD

Sorry i didn't comment on the previous chapter, I've only just had time to read it. I wasn't expecting Matt to be 'Markus' but it was a nice twist. I think Zack and Roxie have been so sweet remembering everything that happened when they were together and it shows how they never actually stopped loving each other and their relationship is starting to grow again. Can't wait for more. :)

Well I'm hopin tht means no more of Matt popping up at Roxie's house again and being a raging abusive drunk to her and I also think tht if her and Zacky get back together thn Zacky should have the kno about Roxie and Matt becuz if Matt's goin to be around its goin to get awkward between him and Roxie unless they r good actors and pretend tht nothing has ever happened between them, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Woah!<3

Holy shit Matt is Mark, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I did not see that one coming! Update soon!!(:

Awesome awesome awesome! Can't wait for more. :)

Don't stop! this is so awesome!<3

Love it, I hope tht she is ok can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, hate to say but Roxie I'm glad tht u regret cheating on Zacky becuz now ur life is shit Im not sayin tht u deserve to get beat becuz no woman deserves to get abused like tht but thts karma biting u in the ass letting u kno tht u fucked up and so in return since karma is a bitch she is goin to fuck u up herself and make u feel regret but I'm glad tht Zacky is there to help u tho I mean he isn't tht hateful but he should kick tht "boyfriend's" ass tho thts for damn sure and Brian u r a nut job u kno tht only u would ask Zacky if he fucked his ex, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Haha loved the whole part with Brian. :D If i were Zack i'd beat the crap out of that 'boyfriend'. Looking forward to more.

I'm very interested to see what is going to happen :) I love it