That was sooo amazing!! There was so much emotion in it!! But I was expecting something more...(you know what!;)) You should definitely turn it into a story! You know how much I love Jimmy and his stories!! I keep telling you that!!:P
It is a very great one shot so now I really hope you turn it into a story! I find you have a good way you write and you got to do feel the emotions! I felt like I was living the life of Megan =) A big congratulation for you ;)
THANK YOUUUU!