Deny - Comments

Freakin jordan! Lol loved it, wish it was a bit longer though/:
Update soon :p

Omfg dude the ending to that chapter i am crying :D

Love love love! Lol Jordan's picture! Funny haha I really like this story I really wanna know what happens next! Update soon please

Thanks guys!! :)

I LOVE this sooo much!! Sorry for seeming so dense before. But I love/hate how stubborn she is and its clear that Jordan was interested even with her stand-off attitude. :)

1. LOVE the picture you chose for Jordan lol i was laughing
2. The picture you chose could almost be them too
3. love love LOVE this story so far can't wait to see where it goes (especially since she didn't let the charm bother her). Seems like you're trying to create a really down to earth character here. :)

This is sooooo gonna get interesting!! Because I've got a good feeling I know where she works! :) can't wait for more!

I really like this story! Correction, I LOVE this story. Jordan is my favorite player, and I feel like you're writing his personality spot on. And I love Callie's mom in this! It's a good use of drama. Can't wait for more!

I love it so far :) great job!

@ Write.with.Love
Thanks! i appreciate it!! :)

Hey! Just wanted to let you know I love this! Jordan Staal is one of my favorites, but your use of you're is wrong. I'm not trying to be an anal loser or anything, but its just a pet peeve of a lot of people and I don't want people to be turned off just because of that.
But more importantly, I LOVE where this story is going especially with her not wanting to go and Jordan's cockiness. :)
(p.s. Sorry if I make you mad.)