Holy shit. That's all I can say. This is one of the best Outsiders fanfiction I've ever read. Everything was so flawlessly written. I loved it. I must say, this is 1000x better than anything I could write. I really can't wait to see what else you have in store. I really like Emmerie's character. And of course, Dally's.
It's really rare for me to find a well-written Outsiders fan-fiction, and this one is excellent. The way you write flows beautifully, and I can't wait for your next update!
Would love for you to update this! You're a great writer, and this definitely seems like a good start to a good story! I'd love to read what you've got.