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oh im curious what will happen next
i like the story

please update soon
thank you

Please update soon!

I'm here to deliver an exceptionally late Mibbaween treat. Sorry about the delay!

I don't think I've ever read a student/teacher story before in my life so this will be a first for me! That definitely works in your favour because I haven't a clue what I'm going to expect and can't really draw any comparisons to anything else either!

So, to reading. I sometimes think that starting a story off with a wakeup scene can be cliché, but pulled off right it can be a good tool for showing the character (after all, when are you most like yourself than when someone has just woken you up? ) and I think you've managed that here. I instantly get the sense that Mariah has this devil-may-care attitude to everything and it continues on through the next few chapters as well. You've built up a very strong character by the end of the first chapter alone and I think that's commendable. Usually, the main character is all holier-than-thou and doesn't do anything wrong, but Mariah totally breaks every single one of those rules and I like it. I mean, I don't think I like her as a person and if I met her I'd probably want to punch her but character-wise, she's so very different to everything that I've read and it's refreshing to read something like that.

Honestly, I'd love to have a teacher like Mr Sanders. All of my lecturers swear and everything but he just has this air of being a complete badass about him and I would have loved a teacher like that when I was still at school. Sometimes the whole thing doesn't seem realistic (unless my school was just super super strict - I'd have been expelled in a heartbeat for saying some of the things that Mariah says!) but it does make for good reading so I'm not really complaining.

All in all, I think you've got a good start here! Like I said, I can't compare to other stories but I like what I've read so far. Keep up the good work!

@ Let Live Again;
Yay! haha. I really need to update this just haven't found the time to. Woot! I love me some comment spams, I will be looking forward to that. It's all good I understand, I write really long chapters so take your time Thank you again for the comment.

Okay, I went ahead and subscribed to this one too because oh my god that first chapter when she was still in bed with her mom that whole "if your father was here.." totally got me going, its gonna take me a while to finish this but I promise I will keep reading it and comment after every chapter I read, "Spam comments of wonderful thought for your story" you're welcome. Haha xxx

Update soon please

Ahhh this is great! I just read every chapter and loved it! Please update when you can, I love this!!

I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!! this is too good :D and I would have killed Matthew Sanders if he would have interrupted me with Brian lol how dare he??? :P

More. I need more. I am addicted to this story and I don't care who knows it lol.
Please update this very, very soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
:D

I LOVED the update! I can't believe her! She's so promiscuous! I love it! :D I can't wait for more and I I hope it's going to be soon!

I just really think Matt is being a bit too involved with her in this one. It does seem like he's following her around and I'd be pissed too! Update soon!

If she thinks Brian is the biggest she ever had, it's because she haven't seen Matt's yet! LOL I know Matt cares about Mariah and stuff but he's starting to get way too annoying for his own good; instead of being such a pain in the ass he should fuck Mariah's brain as Brian were about to do it if he wasn't interrupted! LOL Congratulations for your wins, honey, you sure deserved it! :D

Wow, hooks up with Brian, only to be interrupted by Matt who then takes her home and threatens her mother with social services. Yeah, he's got some balls! I get that he cares, BUT.... Is he being all caring and controlling cus he wants something from her or does he have her best interest at heart?? When he said that if her mother could control her than they would give her to someone who could- it made me think he was talking abouthimself.? Update soon please!!!

Dang, I keep thinking this story will go a certain way but it keeps surprising me! Haha Matt sure is being a damn buzzkill. He needs to lighten up but she doesn't need to be so slutty either. Hehehe. Love this! I want another update already.

I agree with shortygirl! She is being whorisha nd I can't wait to see what happens :)

Mariah is a whore but I like her so much!!
And Matt is a meanie.

I will admit Mariah is acting a bit whore-ish. I don't think Matt should have done that though. There are others ways of getting her to listen

Please update soon

Okay here is a comment, oh shit. What is going to happen? Lol, I just can't wait to read more and I cant even remember the comment I was going to put on here. I love these kind of stories!

Here's your other comment!

And omfg, I just love this. Matt stories + student/teacher stories + smut = one HELL of a story.

To start off with, I really like the banner. It's so pretty and really speaks wonders for the plot. The girl you're using to play Mariah is gorgeous, and that kind of thing always attracts me to a story.

Speaking of Mariah, dude. Lol. She is amazing. I pretty much second everything paracosm. said about her. I love how you don't sugar coat things when it comes to her. You're completely straight-forward with her personality, and I definitely admire that.

I also really like how you write, in general. You have a really nice flow with your writing and it's very easy to read and understand everything that's going on.

Overall, this story is pretty great. I can't wait to see how things progress and what else you have in store. Recommending & subscribing!