My W Unit - Comments

@ Sapphire Wings
Thank you =) I'm so happy you enjoyed it and that it didn't feel forced. I'm still having a hard time believing it's over XD

oh gosh i can`t believe its finally finished!! This was an amazing and beautiful story. the writing is excellent, the characters, their development, the plot. i can`t find words for this story but i will say that it is one of my favourite stories on mibba. nothing felt forced forward or dragged a long which i know is sometimes hard to do so amazing job there. i loved Rai, her personality, her defiance. it made it so interesting to read. I don`t even think i can think of all the stuff i loved about this story!! so i`ll just say i love it all. Awesome job and congrats on finishing!

@ Erin.Grace.
Like whoah. I can't even describe how your comment made me feel except I was on the verge of tears. (I'm secretly a sap like that ;p) The feels man, the feels! It made me so happy to know that you liked my story so much and I could almost feel how much passion you wrote with. Thank you =) Thank you so much. I often feel like I'm dragging this story out, but I know most of the 'filler' chapters are necessary or the story won't make much sense. It is people like you and all my commentors (sp?) that keep my spirit up about publishing online. I mean, I know I like the story, but I don't really know if others do.
I'm glad you read it after Zane and Rai got together or I would have had a hard time Not telling you not to worry haha I hope you like how I plan to finish this story and again thank you for the comment, it made my day.

Excuse my language here but how in the FUCK does this only have 46 (47 with mine) comments?!?! It took me 2 days to read all of these chapters and I have yet to come across one thing that didn't line up! and it's so damn ORIGINAL! Like bloody hell! I keep forgetting this is a werewolf story even though thats the basis of the entire story because it's unlike anything I have ever read EVER and I LOVE it!! holy hell! I've never, not even once, wasted my time in starting to read a story that has over 50 chapters out already much less over 70 and over 100,000words! But boy oh boy am I glad I did and THANK MOTHER FUCKING GOD Zane and her got together! do you know how long I was waiting for that!!! You are lucky you got to that point in the story before I caught up with the end or you would have never heard the end of it from me! but oh God! They have been arrested! and yikes! are they going to go Rogue without their Alpha?!?! and I so hope the Pack comes for them! and I never really thought about what they must have done "OFFICIALLY" to be tried for treason with a fast trial and death penalty as punishment! I would think with all the people they have been with that at least a small group would be assembled to speak on their behalf! and how did they find them!?! the gaurd himself said they have been hiding for a year with out anyone knowing where they were at all, not even a hint! Seriously best story I have come across yet! and I say that with a lot of feeling behind tht and a little sadness to have to drop some stories down in the ranks but I can't deny that you have talent and it's so original I have nothing to even compare it to, and the writing style is splendid, the character development it perfect! you are GREAT at bringing up memories or flahsbacks at just the right time and with perfect detail. Especially when she was being forced to relive her memories you did that perfectly and that was like 3+ chapters of JUST memories and very few else and not once did I find it boring or dragging it on. it was set up perfectly. and keep in mind like I said I read all of this in 2 days. starting at chapter 1! I cried a few times to be honest and was so completely lost in your story my dad says he came into the living room 4ish times trying to tell me something and I didnt see or hear him before he gave up! it's perfect! Honestly why have you not looked into publishing this when you have finished it???

I feel like a good plan to walk into the situation would be for rai to say if she and her pack don't get cleared she has given orders to an anonymous source holding sealed documents and evidence proving what happened to open it abd come out with the information. And the ggovt would prob fear a big wolf rebellion and even humans joining the cause. That'd be so smart. Id ddo that lol.

@ Death_to_Roses
That's exciting! I hope it's awesome and not too stressful =) And thank you

Good luck tomorrow! I start my freshman year. :')

Aahhh he's finally opening up about his feelings a little! Yayyyyy!

You are quite welcome. Yet again this was amazing. It is rare a story here on mibba brings me to tears, very rare. However, this update brought tears to my eyes. I can actually imagine everything going on. Awesome update.

Thanks Sailor Meranda and foREVer an Angel =) Your comments make me smile

Wow, I have been following this story for quite some time. You never cease to amaze me with you updates. They make me smile. These past couple of memory chapters were beyond epic. I am in love with this story, and how you write. : )

Update again soon!! I love this story and how original it is!

Thanks, I will. sorry everyone for not updating in a while, I've been in finals week so it's been wicked crazy. Should be updating soon. =)

Rory is like a kid. He's so cute. :D I'm glad that Lyla isn't the insane jealous type, that would create a lot of problems. haha. Update soon!!! =)

Awww, I think Jasper and Trina are starting to like hr just maybe a little bit. :D I'm so proud!! Lol. I Krynos, he's such a good guy. =) Update soon, can't wait to read more!!

Ok, him saying that about her brother was a low blow and him saying that she doesn't belong anywhere is total BS. Please update soon. I can't wait to read what she does next. =)

Ok, him saying that about her brother was a low blow and him saying that she doesn't belong anywhere is total BS. Please update soon. I can't wait to read what she does next. =)

What happened to her brother...? I'm like so confused, please update soon!! I want to read more and find out what she does to Dr. Carlton.

Ooo! Don't know whether to choose Deklyn or Zane.. I like them both!

My guess is Zane. Lol. This is awesome. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! :D