Taken a Fancy - Comments

@ dougie poynter;
Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you were impressed! :D

Harry and Draco always struck me as a really odd ship. I never personally saw it myself, but you've definitely created a really cute one-shot here! I love how sickeningly couple-ey Hermione and Ron were at the beginning of this - I always pictured the two of them being the typical kissy couple and you've portrayed that so well! I loved that Draco almost tricks Harry into letting on that he's the admirer - so cute and definitely something that I can imagine him doing! Harry is so awkward as well. I had a little giggle about that. For a ship that I don't like, you've definitely impressed me!

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@ aubs
Aw, thank you for the lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

I thought this was super adorable. You really portrayed Harry and Draco really well, just saying, which, I have to say is super amazing. For some reason, I wasn't expecting the ending. I just assumed that Draco would walk away laughing, or insult Harry some way, but that's not what happened. But anyway, I absolutely loved the ending. It was, and I've said this before, was so super cute adorable!

But I think my favorite part was how he was too afraid to tell Ron and Hermione about his crush. It is just so... believable. I don't know, I can just picture this happening between all of the characters. It just makes me wonder what his friends would say if he told them. This was wonderful and I loved it.

Title: 4/5
Layout: 0/5
Grammar: 4/5
Overall Story: 4/5

Drarry is definitely one of my main ships, so I was excited to read this. I loved how you portrayed both Drarry and Romione, even though I do not like Ron and Hermione together. I loved the interaction between Draco and Harry by the tree. I thought the beginning was a bit slow and that much more detail could have been put into the entire story. Overall, I enjoyed this story and I can tell that you tried hard and that you are a great writer. Good luck!

That was just so cute and adorable. I'm a sucker for that kind of stuff. I love Draco like that when he's confident and takes charge. I like how in the beginning he was like how he usually is and then he suddenly went into seductive mode. I'm still giggling about it.

Thank you so much for this gift! The ending almost made me yell 'no' because I was so into it. I didn't want it to end.

Thank you again. It was really good and I enjoyed reading it. It was so cute!