Quarantine the Cannibals - Comments

I just started and finished reading this today and I loved it!

Thank you for updating! I check every day because this story is really good!

I should've been studying for midterms instead of reading this, but damn was this good! I'm excited for the next few chapters!

I started reading this expecting some bad story similar to a Walking Dead fan fiction but this is so good, and even though zombies is an hackneyed concept this is very original.

Wait... Wat?

Did she just commit suicide? DID SHE?! That damn cliff hanger could mean anything! ASDFGHJKL, woman!

Is it wrong to say that this depressed me? No? Okay, yes, this depressed me very much. In a good way? Does that sound weird? Mehhh. Oof, and it gave me nasty chills. Like that skinning alive scene? Holy shit, I literally grabbed my leg because I could feel a tearing sensation!

Did she turn into a cannibal? I'm reeeeally fucking anxious. D:

And poor Arthur! >.<

Another good update. Jesus Christ, that - no, IT STILL IS intense!

That was just so........ AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW!

ERRHH MERRHH GERRHD, THAT WAS SO FUCKING ADORABLE.

AND SEXUAL.

PRETTY DAMN SEXUAL.

I LIKED IT A LOT.

You've out done yourself yet again, missy! That sex scene wasn't cheesy unlike other cliches I see a lot in many other stories. Just... unnnfff. Your descriptions are uncanny and I applaud you for it. Everything is just so damn bittersweet. Krisiga needs to let that man LOVE HER!!!!! AND HER LOVE HIM!!!! ASDFGHJKL!!!!!!

Ugh, continue or else I'll die. This is just so damn amazing I can't even... ugggh. I'm in love with this story.

I didn't think i was really going to like this story as much as i did but im glad i stumbled across it. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Its an amazing story!!!! Me gusta a lot! I want to keep reading more :D

ERH MERH GERHD, SERRRH ERSERHHHM!

I hope you could understand that. :3

Man, I really hope you go past fifteen chapters. This story is too good to just end from 10-15. Like I said: ME NO HAVE IT.

The blonde survivor? I'm not sure whether to pity or be angry with her. Hmmmmm *strokes le awesome beard in thoughtful manner*

Ohhhh, shit. Arthur's gonna blow the fuck up. I sense it, but then I can be wrong. He's a bit unpredictable. Hhahaha!

Urgh, CERNTERNUE!

This is absolutely amazing! I kept imagining Arthur to be pewdiepie, and lo and behold when I clicked the characters tab... Lol ((: Your imagery on the cannibals are absolutely realistic, and every action scene was incredible.

You recommended this to me through my blog, and let me just say, this how all of the qualities I requested!

Starting with the fact that it has zombies, it's also one of the most original stories I've ever read on Mibba. Seriously. Everything flows so nicely together, and your vivid detail is just perfect. Even the very few parts I found to be a bit trippy (like, with Krisiga taking Damian's place), it still seemed to fit. I could actually see that happening, considering the fact that the world is in the middle of a war no one was prepared for and they're really taking in whoever they can get. I doubt any special measures were taken as in depth as they would be normally. So, I really applaud you on that part.

The only thing I wanted to add as a bit of constructive criticism is, although the title is very unique and it immediately drew me in, it kinda spoils what the story is going to be about before we even read. My opinion, is that maybe it'd be a lot less of a give away if you changed it to Quarantine. Just that alone could mean so many different things, and it would still draw the reader's attention. I just figured I'd throw that out there!

Anyway, this story, so far, is just amazing. I can tell you planned this out piece by piece and really took the time to make sure everything worked out and fell into place. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially between Krisiga & Arthur, so please update soon!

Your story got recommended to me. I got to say, this is one of the best original stories I've ever read. It had the perfect amount of speech and description. I got so lost in the beauty of the writing. This is actually better than some novels I've read. Way better. It's to the point this could be published. I'm not joking or telling you what you want to hear. It's the honest truth.

The entire story is build and outlined in a special way. You made the characters really original and quite relatable too. The only thing that kinda messes with me is that she took his place. If someone is drafted and has cancer it's void. Plus there is always a physical exam and she would be found that. That's the only glitch, but that's just my opinion. It's great just the way it is.

I really like how you gave the story a basis, where it all came from. You explained the epidemic and the stages. Not many authors do that. That's very special and unique.

One more glitch that always messes with me is the title. It's very good, I like how you call them cannibals. But it gives the whole story away. There is no mystery or enticing. That's what lures the readers in.

I really, really, REALLY, like the story, no I love the story. It's so beautifully written I just love it. I really want to read more and I'm glad your friend gave me the link. Please do not hesitate to update often:)

Ten chapters? Are you shitting me woman? This story is too good! THERE MUST BE A GAZILLION CHAPTERS. ASDFGHJKL!

And now you dig deeper into the reason why the virus came about. It's scary to know that you made it revolve around a cure for cancer. That's believable, unlike some virus popping out of nowhere or a scientist bringing corpses back to life. And I love how you finally introduced an official description to a (I'm going to call it this) Stage Three zombie/cannibal. It's pretty gruesome!

I KNEW IT! I KNEW I FELT THE SEXUAL TENSION! NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!

Oops, pardon my outburst. :3

Arthur has no boundaries, does he? He's putting the moves on Krisiga and she's completely oblivious! No, Missy, he's got it bad for you and you think he's being sarcastic or is joking around. NEY, WOMAN, NEY!

Heh heh, this story has got me all riled up in a good way. :D

Magz15 here again. Comment swap brought me here, and I originally only read the first chapter because I was short on time. So, I decided to post a longer one this time. First of all, I love her name, Krisiga. It sounds Russian or something, and it’s definitely the most unique name in a story I’ve ever seen. I love how she’s in the Behavioral Analysis Unit; Criminal Minds is one of my all time favorite shows! (even though in the story it says it’s nothing like the show.. oh well)

I like the attack scene. It’s really detailed, and very impressive. I can actually picture it happening in my head, although I’m still having trouble putting faces to names. That will come with time I’m sure though. After all, I’m only on the second chapter.To continue with your praise of great names, Arthur LaMontagne? That just sounds like the name a of a hot guy. Thumbs up on your description of him as well.

On to your story plot now. I love the idea of cannibals. It reminds of the movie, Dawn of the Dead, except much more realistic. The scene where she encounters the old man actually made me a little bit scared, not gonna lie. I also love your adjectives. Winsome treat.. it sounds like language out of a fairytale or something. It brings your story to life!

‘Frownin’ will being wrinkles to your pretty face.’ Oh gosh, that line alone made me smile. I smell a romance, no? Or maybe he was just being flirtatious? I’ve never been one to pick up on traces of love, so it’s probably just a false alarm. My apologies. I find it quite adorable how Arthur calls his parents Mommy and Daddy. Another factor that adds to my suspicion that he’s attractive. haha, his parents “popped” him out. That made me laugh.

AH HA! I’ve been writing all these comments as I’ve been reading the story, and I finally got to the part that says that Arthur was “a handsome one.” My suspicions were correct. I can’t take credit for that, though. Your descriptions are great. Well, I’m gonna stop commenting now or otherwise this will become way too long. But great job and keep up the good work. I’ll be waiting for an update soon (:

oh my gosh.. this is really really good so far! please keep writing, and update soon! (:

I like this so far!:) Really good writing.

I love your zombie story, I like how for once it's not a damsel in distress that needs saving. I like that she's the one doing the rescuing I like her relationship with Arthur as well, they're a funny pair. I can't wait to read more You have a great story so far!

One word: action. Either bloody or sexual, there's surely both! Is it weird that I can feel the sexual tension in this story already? o.o

And wow! The action is so neatly described here! Finally a good zombie fic! Not like the ones, "Here came a zombie. It was decaying and faintly green. I screamed and shot my gun. It fell down and I kicked it because it was a dirty rotten bastard that killed my family and it's their fault I'm an antisocial bitch and push my love interest away, but I want him at the same time."

Nope! Krisiga is a woman of few words, but she's polite and isn't a total bitch because, "oh, woe is me, I'm stuck in a bar with only protein bars to eat. My brother has Leukemia and I'm bitter towards people because of it." Sure the Safe Base was only hours away, but come on. I think I would have lost it if she started complaining all of a sudden.

FINALLY A STORY WHERE THE MAIN FEMALE PROTAGONIST GETS HER PERIOD!!! Sounds like a weird thing to say, but authors never think of the small things we humans go through everyday. Isn't weird that none of them get their period? Did they all of a sudden get their tubes tied or some shit before the apocalypse? COME ON PEOPLE!!!

The car scene was epic. 'Nuff said. And you also incorporated the cramps we females get. You never leave one thing unnoticed and in the past, do you?? ~^u^~

Gah, pardon my praise! I'll stop now. :DDD

The build up. It's getting there. e.e

I love the fact that I already see Arthur's and Krisiga's contrasting characters! Krisiga gives me this sort of 'lone wolf' vibe and Arthur is just an adorable mess! :D Although this is just a filler, if people read closely there is a lot of information given out. Maybe it's just me digging deeper than meant to, but still.

WHY AREN'T THERE MORE COMMENTS? Such a good story gone unnoticed! D:

Never mind the lack thereof! God on, you wonderful human being/writer/etc.! :D

Sorry about your friend. :/ I know what it's like to lose someone. But there is hope.

I thank radio transmission for taking me here. :D I enjoyed it. It's most certainly different. I liked the detail you put into everything. How you build up on certain things is a talent as well. I know I shouldn't comment on this, but I really do like the layout. It's calm and soothing. Not neon colors and with big letters or too small ones. Great job.

This is Awesome!