This is really awesome, I love it so much. Jack Napier stories are always so much more interesting. I love the name Scarlet, as well. It fits so well with the Joker. I like the phrase 'faded green eyes'. And also how you described the bitter coffee, that was good. I'm excited for her to meet the Joker and realize it's Jack. Just one correction, it would be really good if you could have a layout, i think it would attract more readers ya know? If you don't know how to make layouts, I can make one for you - well im not very good at them but I know someone who is! So just PM me and I'll talk to her about making you a layout.