Goodnight Moon - Comments

I miss this story. I hope you have time to update it soon!

I'm gonna be so sad when this story finally comes to close! Amazing update as always! I enjoy this story more and more every chapter!

This is flawless. Please never end it. Or if you do, do a sequel <3

Don't apologize for having a lengthy chapter! I love the lengthy ones! (:

aw aw but vic and anna omg i want the together go away naomi bitch omgggg

i just started reading this today and i absolutely love it! This is exactly how i imagine Vic would be after a lost lover. He's so cute and sweet, it's going to be hard think of him as who he really is, haha. but please, continue!

FUCKING NAOMI

What, this is almost over?! I can't believe it's almost the end of this story.

Victor, Victor, Victor...such a dumb move you pulled there, buddy. I was so happy that he came home for their anniversary and proved Naomi wrong. But then he had to go and ruin it. Why he thought it would be okay for him to go to Jaime's on his and Anna's anniversary is beyond me. So, while I don't really want to take sides, I'm forced to take sides with Anna in this particular situation. Because I know that if my future husband pulled the move Vic did, I would be pissed.

But then Anna was kind of stupid in this chapter, too. I am shocked that she hasn't realized how much of a shit friend Naomi is to her. She actually encouraged Anna to purposely hurt the person that she loves, and Anna didn't call her out on it. I'm actually pretty confused as to why Anna lets Naomi hold so much power over her. She really needs to stand up for herself and tell Naomi to fuck off.

One thing about Naomi that I hope gets cleared up by the end of this story is why she wants Vic and Anna's relationship to fail so badly that she'd willingly hurt her supposed best friend for it to happen. Is she jealous of their relationship or does she want Vic for herself...? I don't even understand it.

But anyways, I'm really happy that this chapter was a long one. Like pandanni4 said, never apologize for a long chapter! Long chapters are awesome.

Yo, Naomi is a fucking bitch. And I want Vic and Sav back together with no problems... SOOO BAD!!

Don't ever apologize for a long chapter! The longer the better! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I knew it! I fucking knew that Vic had someone else! I was all ready to cry from the cuteness that was Vic and Anna and then Rachel had to show up.

This is really unfair of me, but I have the feeling that I'm not going to like Rachel at all. She hasn't done anything (yet) to give me a legitimate reason to dislike her, but I don't even care because she's coming in between Vic and Anna.

But like I said, before Rachel showed up, I was about ready to sob from how adorable Vic and Anna were in this chapter. The Roman candle bit was so adorable and had me wishing I could play with roman candle with a cute boy too. And the fact that Vic wanted to make Anna's birthday a good one, despite the hard place that they're in right now, had me squealing and flailing everywhere.

I really do hope those two end up together in the end because I can tell that they really do love each other, even though they have been going through and continue to go through such a hard time.

I adore this story so much!

This story is so intriguing, I love the plot! Can't wait for the next update!

Damnit, Rachel. You are such a fantastic writer.

Awesome!!! You updated already!

Every chapter I fall more and more in love with this story. I think I'm going to have to say that every time you update, because the more I find out out the characters and the plot, the more I like it.

And Vic is just too adorable for words! Him and Savannah are so cute together. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Fucking Naomi! God damn, I hate her haha

No!!! Why did you stop here!? I really want to know what happens! Its gonna drive me crazy!

Amazing update! As I've said before, I love this story so much! It might be my favorite story on here. ;)

Oh my! Naomi is such a fucking bitch! Ughhh I can't believe her. Seriously. This last chapter was sad :( I wish Vic would just take her back. Like, I know she hurt him, but she's obviously very sorry about it. Just give her one more chance!!!

You have successfully made me cry with this chapter. Luckily, it's in the privacy in my room, so no one's giving me funny looks, but it still sucks.

I'm so upset with Vic right now! I understand that he's trying to save himself from getting hurt again...but he and Anna belong together! I wish he would realize this and stop pushing Anna away.

And could Naomi get hit by a bus or something? I realize that that's probably a rather harsh request, but I can't even care. She's such a bitch. Anna really needs to drop her, ASAP.

I'm so happy you updated!!!!!! I loved this! I'm so excited to find out more about them!