I am so glad I found this story. Its a very original idea, and the pace is really good. I'm happy that you aren't rushing the relation but at the same time moving the plot along. I love Kole and Coli (I think that's her real name I'm on my phone so I don't want to go back and check). Kole character is so well defined and we get the learn Coli character with her and I'm really enjoying the other world of the Sins, I hope eventually well be able to see the world of the Virtues. (Sorry for errors I am on my phone and I have Juliane over my shoulder telling me not to care about grammar :D )
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it!