Finn - Comments

Wow, this was such a gorgeously written story and I found it really different. Finn's such a stand out character and when I read that he liked to wear women's underwear, that kind of turned the whole story for me and I liked it even more. I love how you described his skin, fingernails, and lips all wanting to be pale blue like his hair. I thought that was a clever and creative description.

I'm torn emotionally on this. On one hand, it's hauntingly beautiful and the end is just so chilling, but I just adore the way its written so much that it makes me happy to read it. It's a simply breathtaking story.

This is incredibly haunting.

So haunting and beautiful. It's almost five in the morning, I'm sitting in the dark, and you've completely freaked me out.

Beautiful.

That was really sad. And at the beginning, I could kind of see something like that happening only i was predicting he would ingest something dangerous or something. This was really good and just... did things to my stomach. Can't explain it. Anyways, great job!

This is creepily beautiful. I don't know how to describe it. :o

Just like, wow. I don't even think I can articulate how perfect and chilling the story is. It just is... It gave me chills and gave me all sorts of feelings. Excellent work :)