In My Head - Comments

Thank you guys so much :) That is great to hear. If you guys have any suggestions I'm completely open to consider them.

I love this. So very much. Like the last comment pointed out, it really
is original. Sometimes I get tired of the same stuff, you know? Lately, I've
been looking for a story. This one happens to pass the test!
<3

The best part about this is that it's really original. I love how opposite the voices are, and I've honestly been wondering this for a long time now. I've heard of cases where both twins don't make it, but I wonder if the surviving twin would feel any different when they grow up. Your writing style and perfect wording sums the experience up. I can't wait to read more :)

Well shanks :3 I love you too bby

You really don't need to edit because it's already perfect. I love you. :)