How it Feels to Die - Comments

  • a mimosa pudica

    a mimosa pudica (2200)

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    No! Either she died or her mom finally came to her rescue. The last chapter was so poetic, you used soft and subtle words that just give you goosebumps. I love it!

    I'm still sad that this is the end, I guess she ended up with him so that's okay with me. :)) Good job!
    March 21st, 2013 at 11:07am
  • deactivatedError

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    I simply adored this. It had such raw and vivid material it's honestly breath taking and unlike anything I've ever read amazing job :)
    March 21st, 2013 at 03:25am
  • uberchrome

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    Kill her already so that they could roll off into the sunset and hug each other 69ever. wat. seriously, this is interesting & i felt that dug dug thingy your heart feels when you're waiting for something big to happen ;}
    January 8th, 2013 at 04:48pm
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    I just stumbled upon this and I have to say it fascinates me I know it's almost ending but I'm dying for more :)
    January 3rd, 2013 at 07:40am
  • feder

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    @ saudade.
    Wait and seee haha :). This story has about 1 or 2 chapters left, roughly :D.
    December 30th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • slumflower

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    omg is he gonna kill her
    he's gonna kill her isn't he
    holy moly.
    December 30th, 2012 at 07:29am
  • whiteasfuck

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    I like this story so far Smile keep up the good work !
    December 28th, 2012 at 02:25am