Shamhat - Comments

@ synthian.
Ill consider it...thank you :)

You need to make this into a full length story! The possibilities are wide - Matt's transition to civilization, maybe a love triangle, so on. This is great.

I loved the concept of the whole story and for it to be your first story wow it is amazing. You did a great job Hun, and thank you so much for participating in the contest. Loved it! :)

This was your first time writing sexy stuff? I think you did great! And really good imagination! This was a crazy concept, but i really liked it!