The Person Within Me / kafarlafar Originality: 10/10 Having too rivalries is what got you the majority of your points. Most people just have one. Rival Relationship: 10/10 Sibling Rivalry along with Self Rivalry. Awesome. Plot: 10/10 That. Was. Beautiful. You are the very first person to write a story with a psychological disorder playing as the main factor and explain it well. I mean goodness! All of the relationships were explained with fine detail, not too much but not too little. Great ending too. Spelling and Grammar: -1 -1 -1 Score:77