I absolutely LOVED this!!
January 23rd, 2013 at 03:41am
The Person Within Me / kafarlafar
Originality: 10/10
Having too rivalries is what got you the majority of your points. Most people just have one.
Rival Relationship: 10/10
Sibling Rivalry along with Self Rivalry. Awesome.
Plot: 10/10
That. Was. Beautiful. You are the very first person to write a story with a psychological disorder playing as the main factor and explain it well. I mean goodness! All of the relationships were explained with fine detail, not too much but not too little. Great ending too.
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Score:77