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  • DefiningCommonSense

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    That was so cute.
    I think it was perfect :D
    February 23rd, 2013 at 01:25am
  • JackWills.

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    This story was cute. I felt as though that it moved a little too quickly though. I liked your ideas, but I feel as though they could have been spread out and more detail could have been added.

    With that said I think that the storyline was adorable and I really liked the emotion that the two characters had.

    Good luck! Mr. Green
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:41am
  • jess123

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    Cute is the word!! Not sure if I'd every write another Crosby story but If I did it would involve a girl from Nova scotia. Very cute idea! Nice work
    December 28th, 2012 at 01:51pm
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