Age Is Just a Number - Comments

Just finished reading yet another fanfic! The ending was great! :) I liked this.

It's fine, I was kinda a bitch with my response. Thank you, though. c:

@ HeatherFAIA
Yeah, I've checked out your other stories. They're great. First fanfics are bad, aren't they? Sorry for being a dick about that. :/

@ Idgaf_guys
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@ Idgaf_guys
This was the first fanfic I ever wrote and it was written over a year ago. Then, my grammar was fucking terrible, I 100% agree with you there.
I know the spacing is shit, this was also posted on qoutev, I just copied and pasted it.
And the age difference? Don't like it, don't read it.
Pretty fucking simple.

I am going to put this in the nicest way possible: This really gave me a headache.
First of all, a relationship between 13 year old and a 25 year old? That's not only illegal, but slightly concerning that you think it's okay to write this.
Second of all, your line spacing. Maybe it's just your computer or something, but it's difficult to read. Like, really difficult.
Third, how old are you? Your grammar and English and mechanics of the English language gave me a headache. There is a difference between 'your' (as in that belongs to you) and 'you're' (as in you are). There is also a difference between 'there' (as in a place) and 'their' (as in that belongs to someone). Maybe it's because I'm a grammar freak that I'm beig so critical on this, but, no.
Fourth; Your plot and plot devices are extremely under-developed. i had a hard time not only reading this, but, actualy finding a plot and conflict.
I understand this is written for fun and was written a while ago, because its a fanfic (I write them myself), but this... No. Sorry this was harsh, but I needed to get it off my chest.

loved this it was really good!!!!!!!

@itstonysroofstop I have the story posted and finished on qoutev. I just copied and pasted it on here, that's why it's like that. I just don't feel like going through all of it and fixing it.

this is good. the only thing that confuses me is the spacing. why is everything so far apart?

please please please make more chapters PLEASE!!!!!!

make more chapters :(((((

I like it.

Write more please

I really like this story so far...keep up the great work ^__^