Beast And The Harlot - Comments

Uhhhhhh I can't wait to see what happens next :D Update soon :D

Oh shit! That...was definitely as twist. I can't wait for the explanation, and to see what intel BVB has. Mmm. Purdy <3

I love it! Update soon!

Yay! An update!!! I missed this! So now he knows... Can't wait to see where this goes, or what the news is the BVB has... Oh, and that first pic of Matt, the berrys and Dan is one of my favs! So much sexy in one frame... Damn! Lol

Oh lord a meeting with the rival? That doesn't sound all that great :-/. Wait? WHAT!? Dana is Shads wife? But why doesn't he remember her. Loved it.

hahahahah i'm guessing that shads wont take those news very well so i guess he kind of lost his memory when he hit his head back before he got turned, since he doesn't remember her this story is fun and awesome

I really really really love this story. And that girl and how she bests Shads nearly everytime lmao. Gotta love girl power ;-).

I loved the first chapter. Very awesome and I love concept of the story. I plan on finishing the other 4 chapters very soon :-)

I love this!

ermergerddddddd. plot twisttttttttt. haha Loved the chapter and Matt is such a little kid, love him tho haha

love that you slipped yourself in here...i was like Dana's married to Mattie! yay! hahah! i'm such a child. this keeps getting better and better....was he dreaming about the past and maybe his wife really is the woman with hazel eyes. i think he could have hit his head pretty hard or something so he doesn't remember.....loved the pics at the end....the last one made me smile. Matt looks like an all american guy.

And the plot thickens! So was he dreaming this? Or was it really how he turned? And could lavender eyes been his wife at one point and now hd just doesn't remember? And if so, why is she toying with him so much? Oh the many questions! I loved this. And thanks for the pics at the end. That last one of Matt looking all happy and au naturale almost made me hit the floor, so gorgeous!

uuuuhhhh I think the girl with purple eyes is his wife, and he doesn't remember her because of he got knocked up when he fell on the floor. This is interesting and gets better :D Update soon!!!

ooh it just gets more and more interesting and mysterious who's the dude with sandy colored hair and brown eyes- first thought was Brian- but he'd know who the chick with lavender colored eyes is then.. hmm..
and is that chick really dana? -his wife..
but then again- he should totally remember that, right?? unless someone did something to make him forget about it.. aah i'm so lovin' this it makes my head spin with ideas and thoughts <3

hahaha Jimmy.. he's just way too adorable <3

I like getting a little background on Matt. And now, of course, I'm wondering about her identity. But of course, I'm meant to, right? Lol. Loved it!

I laughed so hard in the shopping part xD maybe she's half vampire? who knows but I can't wait to see more :D Update soon!!!

Hahahaha! Again, I laughed. I like her so much. It's so fun to read a story where the girl has control over Matt, a little dominance. He's always portrayed as so seductive and able to get whatever he wants. :) And I agree with BeenDownThatRoad, those cars ARE sexy.

I laughed out loud while reading this. She is really fucking with him! I wonder what he will do now? I love that she has him so rattled. That whole bathroom scene with him sniffing his armpits and everything. Too funny. The perv in me was kind Of hoping for more when she kissed him in the bushes, but I'm sure there will be more later on. Update soon please!!! And drool..., those cars are sexy,

"You got anything you want to tell me!" i started sniggering in class and my lecturer looked at me funny and asked me to share the joke...i told him that i was questioning the guy who was sitting next to me's sexuality....(there wasn't anyone sitting next to me btw) and then i read end of that paragraph and sniggered again at Shadows sniffing his armpits...hahahaha...
who says Whammied anymore....hahahah!!! Shadows is getting old! haha....
*drools over the sexy cars in the garage*
epic chapter!!

"You got anything you want to tell me!" i started sniggering in class and my lecturer looked at me funny and asked me to share the joke...i told him that i was questioning the guy who was sitting next to me's sexuality....(there wasn't anyone sitting next to me btw) and then i read end of that paragraph and sniggered again at Shadows sniffing his armpits...hahahaha...
who says Whammied anymore....hahahah!!! Shadows is getting old! haha....
*drools over the sexy cars in the garage*
epic chapter!!