Microphone Mendacity - Comments

OKAY... this is by far the best story comment swap has taken me to. I've never read anything for the members of You Me At Six. I've only read the first few chapters, but I can't wait to see what happens next! I like the length of the chapters, it's short but not too short. You're wanting more and more!

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This wee story caught my attention from the get go...I was eager to hear what happened with Lauren and josh from the start.
Very well written and being from the uk reading arse instead of ass makes a big difference to me. I look forward to reading the sequel!

This story is pretty good. I like the layout and the writing style. It's clean looking and you use a lot of description. You don't make the chapters too short or too long. I don't really see that many errors and the ones I do see are very minor and easily fixed. The first chapter is really cute and this story seems to be going somewhere cool, good job.

This my first time reading this story or any story about one of the members of You Me At Six. You set the bar pretty high for any other stories that I might want to read about Josh. Any way, I love the way the story was written and you made the characters come to life which is great! Overall you're story is bomb, the good kind not the bad! I totally HAVE to read the sequel.

I think I'm going to pee.
She totally is pregnant.
Amazing story by the way. ♥

She's so pregnant.

I love this story so much, please update again soon :)

she's pregnant isn't she omfg d r a m a

Wooah. How amazing was that! Honestly, shoot me, but I think the part with him and Abigail was really cute.

Man I love this story. I haven't commented in a while and I'm sorry. It's been so great reading it. Definitely one of my favorites I've read. :)

I <3 this.

This story is amazing, please update again soon :D

I have a feeling Lauren is going to say something she will regret when she likes Josh as well.
Abigail will find out soon but accident and she'll be pissed off with Josh and there will be a fight between Abigail and Lauren I reckon.
Update soon :)

This is magic! Update update update! C:

Ugh this story is so perfect. I can't get enough. I love it and you for being brilliant and writing it. Have a wonderful birthday!<3

Jesus christ. let me love you! The way you write is memorizing! I can't help but think that someone should catch them, or maybe she hooks up with Dan. Never the less, this is BY FAR my favorite YMAS story i've read, and trust me. I've read a lot! Have a great birthday darlin'!

Awesome chapter and happy birthday for tomorrow!

This is not going to be good. It's just a disaster waiting to happen. So Josh can't stop thinking about Lauren but can't leave Abigail? Not that is definitely a dilemma. And Josh asking Lauren on tour....a bomb is going to exploded! I look forward to the next update!

I pretty much fell in love with this story the moment I discovered it. Read it all in one go. It's got everything: excitement, sex and secrecy. The perfect formula!
P.S. A sequel would be very much appreciated!

And I definitely want a sequel~