This story was simply amazing. I loved it so much. But I am still confused. How did Lottie get out if she was the first one to go missing and was in the painting?
This is too intense! Oh my goodness. I tried reading it at night and couldn't! (It's not too easy during the day either!) You guys are doing a bangin' job on the creepy factor!
This is so creepy! I love how Harry tries to be all brave for her! Those changing picutres were so creepy! I can totally see something like that happening in a haunted house!
Oooh, super creepy. I love it so far guys! Liam and Anise are going to be hilarious, as are the tomlinson siblings! I can see Zayn being the big strong one that dies first Harry and Sophie are super duper cute. I just know they're going to end up cuddling even if Sophie doesn't want them to(; I wish nothing bad had to happen to any of them!
Oh dear, just imagining Liam as a lust driven slightly perverted boy is...well. I can confidently say that 'getting it on' in a supposedly haunted castle isn't one of my future fantasies. Sheesh, doesn't the weird feeling of being watched by the supernatural or the thought of a friend barging in bother them!? Anywhooooo, great chapter :D and sufficiently creepy!
How funny is that, mine was a dare haunted place too! Well, comment for comment. Even though I don't listen to 1D I like this. I REALLY like how you started it off. It was creepy, but I like creepy. The layout was really pretty too by the way.