Who's Afraid of the Dark? - Comments

  • ButterGirl96

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    This story was simply amazing. I loved it so much. But I am still confused. How did Lottie get out if she was the first one to go missing and was in the painting?
    May 18th, 2013 at 10:11am
  • beccalynn

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    This is too intense! Oh my goodness. I tried reading it at night and couldn't! (It's not too easy during the day either!) You guys are doing a bangin' job on the creepy factor!
    May 15th, 2013 at 01:03am
  • Mogar.

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    Owwwww. Nialler, man. Glass sucks, like, Fuck. I have no words.

    More soon! :)
    April 23rd, 2013 at 04:35am
  • HelloHolaBonjour

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    ahhhh bugger! Double post!
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:10pm
  • HelloHolaBonjour

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    Jesus I don't even like One Direction very much any more but I decided to give this a go and I'm hooked! Hope you update soon!

    P.S. I hope that if Zayn dies you'll at least make it easy on me :(
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:10pm
  • Maddi;

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    Ohhh Louis!!! Noooo :(
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:09pm
  • beauty on ice

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    This is so creepy! I love how Harry tries to be all brave for her! Those changing picutres were so creepy! I can totally see something like that happening in a haunted house!

    Get well soon Katie <3 Mibba loves you!
    April 4th, 2013 at 09:01pm
  • thewolf.

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    Brave Harry is too cute. I want him holding me when I'm scared.
    March 10th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • thewolf.

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    Sexy and frightening what a great combination! This will teach those naughty kids not to put sex before safety! Hahaha.
    February 26th, 2013 at 02:57pm
  • Maddi;

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    Ahh that was so creepy! I hope Lottie is okay ):
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • Ms. Styles

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    Oh man! I don't know if I'd have been able to go into that cellar, even if I got to follow behind Harry!
    So good, update soon :3
    January 26th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • Maddi;

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    Oooh, super creepy. I love it so far guys! Liam and Anise are going to be hilarious, as are the tomlinson siblings! I can see Zayn being the big strong one that dies first Cry Harry and Sophie are super duper cute. I just know they're going to end up cuddling even if Sophie doesn't want them to(;
    I wish nothing bad had to happen to any of them!
    January 25th, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • DJ Malik

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    this is so creepy already
    January 25th, 2013 at 09:41pm
  • somethingbittersweet

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    i get goosebumps reading only the 1st chapter!
    January 20th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • teenage hearts

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    Oh dear, just imagining Liam as a lust driven slightly perverted boy is...well. I can confidently say that 'getting it on' in a supposedly haunted castle isn't one of my future fantasies. Sheesh, doesn't the weird feeling of being watched by the supernatural or the thought of a friend barging in bother them!? Anywhooooo, great chapter :D and sufficiently creepy!
    January 20th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • wishful;

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    Oh my god Tomlinson siblings, listen to sensible Zayn! I love how he thought it was Lou...gosh kids.
    January 20th, 2013 at 12:44am
  • daenerysjauregui

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    Oh shit oh shit oh shit oh SHIT!!!
    White people!! Hahaha, just kidding.
    This is really good! :D
    January 4th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • psychotic secrets;

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    How funny is that, mine was a dare haunted place too! Well, comment for comment. Even though I don't listen to 1D I like this. I REALLY like how you started it off. It was creepy, but I like creepy. The layout was really pretty too by the way.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • daenerysjauregui

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    I'm sold! I'm already liking it!
    Very creepy
    January 3rd, 2013 at 03:34pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    Her riddle.. it creeped me out.. I'm shivering...
    January 2nd, 2013 at 11:42pm