I love this story. I think what I would definitely like to see a little more of would be some sexual tension, though. I love reading about how the characters lust for each other.
But other than that, this story is fantastic. Update soon. (:
Okay at first I was very confused then I was just turned on then I was laughing. If the first two chapters can make me feel all of that I can't wait for the rest of the story.