Blood On Your Hands - Comments

@ devilprice
Ah, see I had no idea English wasn't your first language. In that case, disregard my criticism. You've done amazing! :)

@ foREVer_Synyster
Thanks for everything, and the story was written a good while ago. For my defense I'll just say - try writing in a language that's not your native one, of course it's meant in a non offensive way although I know it sounds offensive. But even now when I've written another ten stories (at least) besides this piece, I don't make a lot of sense when I write those little side remarks. Maybe the shitty english is to blame, maybe it's confusing with Elle's inner voices, but what the hell. :)

Absolutely amazing! Elle was great and I could only imagine a blast to write. The ending was a little confusing, and then BAM it all made sense. I can't wait to read the sequel! :) But damn Brian, I really though they were gonna have this happy, sexy ending.

If I can offer you a little constructive criticism, read over your chapters before posting them up. There were a few times where I had to mentally rearrange what you'd written.

But still, I absolutley loved this story! :D

Amazing ending :)

Why? Why would you do this? Why would you leave it a cliffhanger? I'm gonna die. I don't want to die without knowing the ending to this. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH, IM GOING TO RE-READ IT.

Noooo please don't let her die. I don't think she deserves it. Such a great story.

I really hope you plan on finishing this! I'm hooked to it, it's very interesting and I feel like I NEED to know what happens. Please finish it! It's such a great story.

this story is so different and so interesting! daaamn I want more pleaseee :)

I think I adore this chapter the most since you made your own character bad talk about you, the writer. It's like a trip over the fourth wall that you don't even notice is there. But yay! She blew up the broad. Though she still doesn't have proof that she didn't kill Michelle's family. Hmm, I wonder what that's all about though. More soon please! c:

Love it, so the broad tht Elle just blew up was the one tht killed Michelle's family and now Brian doesn't kno where Michelle is but I'm tryin to figure out y is tht so important to him, oh and um Brian y does Elle have to do something ur a murderer too so y dont u do something or r u admitting tht Elle got better aim than u, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ eli666_
thank you, love, for the good words. :)

I am so in love with this story. Best one I've ever read, and its not even finished. Congratulations! I can't wait for an update :3

And by the way, you killed me when Elle called Michelle a horse face, LOL. Because being honest, they both do look like a horse :)

Who in the hell is this broad can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Uh oh. I don't trust this girl at all. I was a bit concerned when she said Elle. I was thinking about it until I read the last sentence. Then I just cracked out laughing. It seemed strange for Elle to miss that little tid bit. So anxious to know what's going on! (I know I say that every time but its always true.)

Jimmy I love u man, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Ahh, I love Jimmy. Always such the weirdo, and I love it. More soon pleaseeee<3

Aww. I'm sorry I'm behind. I've been a bit busy. But holy crap, I almost had a heart attack when Catherine said to show them "hospitality" and then I just got a headache when they said they were guests. I mean, what da fuck? Please tell me this gets explained soon?

Well I'm glad tht she didn't kill him anyhoo sooo what does she want with the suitcase to plan Catherine and the six bodyguards death and thn help the guys escape can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, well what is Elle goin to do can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

what she wants her to take out the guys?!?!?!
uh ohhhhhh i dont think she can do that thats not right i mean they helped her get away!
love this!