Blood On Your Hands - Comments

Oh i'm stupid. I had to reread this.

I honestly don't understand what is happening. Are they cops or are they like a gang? I'm so confused.

wow that was unexpected!!! i really hope brian turn things around.

Holy shift was not expecting that !!!"
Love this !!!

I pretty much just fell out of my chair! I don't think anything could have prepared me for that. Its crazy thinking about how both Matt and Brian turned on her, hell, I fell for their act too! You definitely surprised me with this one, but I like it! Now I'll just refresh this page until I see a new chapter

@ devilprice
Take your time! I'll just be freaking out over here while I wait. I can't wait to see what the have in store for the poor girl.

@ Suck My Kiss.
That one really did make me smile. If I'll have the time, I'll write it tomorrow, hun. :)

Holy...fuck... I did NOT see that coming. Shit girl, you're giving me a heart attack over here. I need another update.. this is insane. Oh my god. I'm freaking out.

You must be trying to kill me here. Leaving me hanging like that is cruel! It's relieving to see that Elle is falling under Brian's charms (just barely, but enough to let me know she still is a little sane!). Whoever is out there definitely got a little show. I just hope they haven't hit Brian or Elle. Otherwise I may pass out. Thanks for the quick update, love!

omg plz uodate soon. i cant wait to find out who the person in the field is.

Damn I wonder if it's Matt tracking them or if someone else has put the tracker on the car?

Damn Brian looks like he's going to ravish her there beside the road.

Hmm Matt's tracking her :p
Uh oh wonder whose shooting !!!!
Can't wait to see if things go further if if it stops there lol
Love this

Great chapter ! Loved how it was in Brian's POV
I like how Brian was actually calm in this and that he admits Morrison's attractive and he would go for her lol
Can't wait to see if she rejects the money or takes it !
Love this

@ revengenz1
Thank you for the sweet words, love!

You never fail to make me smile. I definitely got into Brian's head in this chapter! Every update gets better and better. It's going to be funny watching Elle train Brian. Keep up the AMAZING work, hunny!

“And what do you think I’m going to do with him when he’s like this?”
“Fuck me, I hope.”

Oh lord, does Brian realize who it is standing there or he is just consumed with sex lol

Damn I wonder what else Michelle has said to him. He obviously hasn't realized that Michelle is a killer too.

I love how Matt and Jimmy just dumped him there and took off like a bat out of a hell lol

Brian thinks she killed ana ?!
Wow wonder what else Michelle told him
Looove this

I wish I could get inside Brian's head to see what he's really thinking about Elle. I think his dislike for her runs deeper than just the fact that he knows she's a murderer. I can only guess at these things! Loved the chapter, especially how Matt and Jimmy dealt with drunk Brian Update soon, love!

oh lord them together in the middle of nowhere is going to be interesting lol

Damn and Michelle had to go and spill the beans to Brian about Matt and Jimmy.

I cannot wait to see how this turns out. Your writing really is wonderful :)