Blood On Your Hands - Comments

Wow, Brian went and picked up a bimbo named Elle? Hahaha that's a bit subconscious on his part and kinda shows that he's definitely got the hots for our Elle. He's jealous as hell of Matt

love it! just wooooow!!

Absolutely loved this update! I could actually see Matt and Elle being more than just co-workers, and imagining Brian's reaction is priceless! Beautifully written, love love love this. Update soon! x

Ahhhhh Loove this :)
Love how she used syns guitar to hit Matt lol
And how you ended it with her askin for her ten grand :p
More soon ?!!?

hmm Matt's unless a good actor he's pretty clueless about who killed Ana, and was even more miffed about Michelle's involvement.

I love how butt hurt and jealous Brian is :-) I wonder how long it will be before he snaps :p

@ gothique4
After all, who doesn't like Synyster Gates? Although Elle would never admit it, we all know she has a thing for him, maybe she just doesn't realize it. yet. should hit some sense into her.

Damn Michelle turned out to be a right bitch, but who's she working for. And Matt's popped up again to take her to the hospital but how would he have known she needed to go??

Hahahaha I love her reaction to Brian being all Synyster Gates and all hot and schmexy :-)

Uh oh did Matt kill Anna ?!?
Loove this

oh damn I wonder if it was Matt that killed Ana?

Brian's not much good around blood is he lol

love it! update sooon!

Love this!!! More soon ?!?!?

@ gothique4
Thank you, It was really fun to write it.

oh lord I was in hysterics about Jimmy and Zacky and the box. I could just picture Jimmy shaking the hell out of the box.

Now I've got an image of him being killed by Elle while he's standing there in a pink bra.

This is chapter is awesome!

@ gothique4
I must admit, when the thought came to me, it was too hard to ignore it.
I'm trying to make Elle as realistic as possible. It can't be that a killer is superhuman, in this case- she gets unsure when involved in any kind of speeches/things/actions that are related to... khem... making love.

hahahaha big bad Brian didn't even get one hit in before she knocked his ass out. That's gonna bruise his ego a bit lol

I love how she moved around with a book in front of her face so she wouldn't see Brian and Michelle going for it. I'm surprised that she didn't walk into anything

I'm really liking this so far and looking forward to reading more :-)

I really like the characterization of Elle. Pretty three dimensional, which is very good, and throw that in an interesting somewhat original situation. Kudos. I want to see more.