@ MasqueradingMemories aw I'm really happy that you like it :D and yeah, I didn't want Jack's girlfriend to be a bitch cause I wanted everyone to be like "aw :(" when they break up hehe
I don't usually like characters when they're so cocky and such but I really like Alex's character. So good job on that(: And I like Freya because she doesn't seem like a bitch so it's going to be kind of sad when they break up. But jalex so it's okay.
@ Gaskarthloveme haha aw thankyou so much! and yeah, I really hate it when two characters hate each other at first but by the 5th chapter they're like in love so I'm gonna try and make this sort of realistic!
Ohohoh scandalous! Gahh, I'm in love with this story already. Excited for the next chapter :) yaya, I'm kind of happy you're not doing smut right away cause some stories do and the plot moves way way too fast.
I am in love with this story already. I'm like really intrigued to find out how they actually get together. Anyway it's a really awesome story and I can wait for the next update
exactly!