Today My Life Begins - Comments

Just a little note that might help in your summary:
You have "it wasn't supposed to be nothing more than a friendship" when i think you mean "it wasn't supposed to be anything more than a friendship"
It coukd confuse someone because one means, "yeah, it was never supposed to not become more than a friendship" and one means "we were never supposed to become more than a friendship", you know what i mean? Haha. anywah, just thought I'd point that out since yiur summary is the first thing a reader reads when they come to your story so i thought it might be helpful:-)
Love the story though.<3

Holy fucking shit, god damn it Darcy I want to fucking punch u in ur uterus but since ur pregnant ur face will suffice anyhoo Urbana fucking tell Bruno what Darcy told u and I mean everything cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Lol. Thanks for the comments. I love your comments. Also Gabby doesn't strip anymore which is why Quincy decided to live with her in the first place. Either way you post the most memorable comments! I'm glad you are really into it and I'll try to update ASAP.
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Here is what u do, fuck tht bitch fucking hoe stick to ur damn stripping ok anyhoo Darcy u call Bruno tell him tht ur pregnant and tht Gabby blackmailed u to break up with him or she will tell the media about the baby...u and Bruno go to the press have a meeting about it and thn once the world knows about pregnant Darcy, Darcy u tell Quincy what Gabby did and thn he breaks up with her and there is nothing she can do becuz honestly sweetheart now likes a gold digging bitch so thts what u do cry tht shit out of ur system thn put ur big girl panties on and tell tht bitch tht she isn't goin to ruin ur happiness becuz she is bitter bitch no one likes u at all Darcy and Fi tolerate u becuz it dating Quincy ur a non factor bitch u earn ur money by takin ur clothes off and u want respect bitch swerve u got to earn it not wish for it, Darcy call Bruno don't let tht bitch scare u from ur happiness u slap tht bitch back by being the bigger person and out do her duh, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Omg the mom is awake, Bruno and Darcy r dating and Fi and Ari r dating omg such a happy day, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, this story is gettin good and Quincy ur jealous that Fi is with Ari and Gabby ur a hoe, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, I wasn't able to see the color of her hair so can u just tell me and Bruno is so sweet, not only did he take her to the hospital to see her mom for the first time but he did five things on her bucket list with her thts cute, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow. You really go in with these comments, but I love it so much!
Once I type chapter 11 and 12, I'll be posting chapters 9 and 10. I always want to be two chapters ahead of myself before posting anything.

Love it, I'm glad tht Allan is gone now this whole psycho Allan meeting was needed but certain people like Gabby wasn't needed, get it through ur head people meaning Gabby and Dad there is a huge difference between consent and rape ok....Darcy gave Bruno consent to have sex with her even tho they were drunk but she made a clear decision and said yes, and Allan tried to forcefully have sex with her when she clearly said no and he kept trying ending up punching her and I don't think tht it shouldn't matter how old the partner, only on certain levels tho like a prepubescent and a twenty year old tht a no no, but in this case it shouldn't matter Gabby, what does matter is the decision tht the receiving end, Darcy, gives to tht said partner, Bruno and Allan, yes or no and I agree with Finna, Gabby ur jealous becuz Darcy got to sleep with Bruno and u didnt bitch so u can calm down with tht one I'm sure if u didnt find out about them sleeping together u would have found a way in a stripper like route to sleep with him and get bragging rights yeah right bitch get a life, oh thts a low blow towards Finna yeah she still has a crush on Quincy but it shouldn't bother u unless ur afraid tht ur goin to lose him to her
tht is which would make u insecure and easily jealous which would be weird cuz u strip for a living, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

One I knew Allan was a psycho ex I mean like the way his attitude is towards Bruno like seriously dude give up, two I love tht Bruno came to Darcy's rescue I'm pretty sure tht Quincy called Bruno to pick her up but thts my theory,three ummm Gabby ur not hot shit I mean for the love of God u r a stripper no offense to strippers make ur money boo boo but Gabby don't think u hot shit becuz u got easy money and dont think tht Bruno likes u becuz he is terrified of u, four I think tht Quincy needs to get rid of Gabby and get with Finna, five love Finna she is awesome, six Darcy just becuz Bruno isnt in love with u when u guys had sex doesnt mean he dont love u becuz he does love u for some people it takes a short amount of time for them to realize tht they love someone just by spending those number of days or weeks together, seven Darcy i think tht u love Bruno as well but u dont want to admit it yes falling in love is on ur bucket list but for tht to happen u need to love someone and u love Bruno but ur scared becuz u dont think tht loving someone after a short amount of days is the right way which is weird becuz u want to fall in love so y should it matter tht Bruno loves u after so many days i mean do u not believe in love at first sight or something or did u feel tht it was wrong tht he said it during sex but like everyone said u dont kno what his feelings r towards u becuz u dont give him the time of day to listen to him and understand tht he loves u, he could have been the typical guy: get to kno u and u knowing him, thn later on u go to an after party get shitfaced, go back to ur place and have sex, and thn leave u in the morning before u wake up, he changes his number so u wont call him and never hear from him again but he didnt becuz he loves u i mean he went through all tht trouble of calling and texting u, calling Finna and Quincy just to see how u r doin becuz u r being stubborn and don't want to pick up the phone and talk, picking u up from the pizza shop to rescue u from Allan becuz u kno tht does not sound like a person who loves u so do me a favor stop being a stubborn girl and talk to him when u wake up, and eight i really love this story so much has already happened in six chapters, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awesome keep it going

Thank you and I did fix, so it should be working now. At least it was when I re-read the chapter.

I actually like this keep it going but you need to fix the link of darcy its not showing