Potentially Lovely, Perpetually Human - Comments

I've never played assassin's creed, but this is so good that I really want to now.
I've stumbled upon your story quite by accident, and I have to confess that it was the banner that attracted my attention first, but as soon as I started reading, I was hooked.
I don't know if you're going to continue this, but I really hope you do, because it is absolutely brilliant.

I've know nothing about Assissin's Creed. Obviously that is not a neccessity. I absolutely LOVED it. The story line, how it was written, everything about it. Please, keep going, don't leave me wondering.

@ Secrets.Are.Lies
haha I'm completely obsessed. It's a little sickening. But I'm glad you like the story! I'll try to update soon :]

@ RomansRevenge;;
Thank you!

Wow, this is such a beautiful story! It flows together very well and is finely detailed :)

You could say I'm also obsessed over Assassin's Creed (having played almost every game), so I am completely in love! XD

Absolutely love it! Great so far

Um... I'm using a browser call Comodo Dragon. It's like a another version of Google Crome.

@ iMusic-Freak
I'll try to fix the layout when I get home...I wasn't aware the text was too small because it shows up fine on my laptop. What browser are you using? I'll have to test multiple ones haha
Thanks for reading!!

Love the intro to the story, the layout and the banner. (: I would defiantly recommend and subscribe, but... I could barely see the text. Making it a little bigger would be good. That is all.